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Old 2007-05-03, 11:59 PM
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Default [Short-Romance] Moonlight Sonata (Eugene & Uhm Tae Woong) [Complete]

So addicted to Wonderful Life and Sassy Girl Choon Hyang before... I love Eugene so much and Uhm Tae Woong is such a good actor. So, I wrote a short story of a romance between them (though, you may think they don't look together). I hope you will like this one.

MOONLIGHT SONATA


CAST:
Uhm Tae Woong as Carlo Cho

(A divorce man who falls in love with a 23 years old woman)

Eugene as Nina Nam

(A woman who falls in love with a man who's 12 years older than her)

Lee Dong Wook as Steven Nam

(Nina's caring and loving brother)

Park Ye Jin as Lorraine Sung

(Steven's college classmate. Carlo's co-worker. She had a crush on Carlo)

Kim So Yeon as Vivian Ha

(Carlo's ex-wife)

Lee Ji Hoon as Tristan Shin

(The man that Steven wants Nina to marry)

Story:

Carlo was very happy after marrying Vivian. They were boyfriend since college and they got married 3 years after their graduation. Next month, they will go to celebrate their 10th year anniversary but Vivian decided to divorce Carlo. Carlo asks Vivian why she wants a divorce. Vivian answered him that she's not happy anymore with Carlo and she wants to be single again. She was depressed for not giving a child for Carlo because she's afraid because the doctor said that her ovary can produce fertile eggs. Two years after Carlo and Vivian divorce, Carlo was already 35 years old. He was in the gym at that time when he saw a woman running on the treadmill. The woman was beautiful and has a refreshing aura even she looks like very tough. Carlo approach the woman asks if she's with someone. The woman says no; Carlo asks for her name. The woman said her name is Nina Nam. Carlo introduces himself to Nina. After they work out, Carlo invites Nina for a lunch date and Nina accept it. They talk about a lot of things but they have one thing in common, they can play piano. Carlo asks Nina what is her favorite piano piece, Nina love the Moonlight Sonata. Carlo smiled and said that he also love that piano piece. Nina suddenly asks Carlo how old he is. Carlo answer 35, Nina told him that he looks like 28! Carlo also asks Nina about her age, she said 23. Carlo smiled because he thought Nina was in late 20?s because she looks mature for her age. Nina smiled at him. It?s time that Nina has to live. Carlo asks Nina for her number and she gives it to him. When Nina arrived home, her brother, Steven, was there. Steven was a protective brother to him, Steven don't want her to get hurt. Nina just broke up with his boyfriend last month. She asks Steven if ever she has a new love, what he will do. Steven answers as long as the man loves her and there no people involve to that man, it's alright for him that Nina have a new boyfriend. That night, Nina receives a message from Carlo. Carlo asks her if she's available on weekend, Carlo wants to see her and invite her for a dinner date. Nina accepts Carlo's invitation. From that day, Carlo always calls Nina. He even sent some gift and flowers from Nina. Steven was so happy to see her sister so happy but he's wondering why Nina don't introduce Carlo to him. One day, Carlo and Nina watch an opera. At the middle of the show, Nina holds Carlo's hand. Carlo looks at her but Nina just smiled. When Carlo takes Nina home that was the time that Carlo told Nina how he feels for her, that he already in love with Nina. Nina feels happy so she embraces Carlo and tells him how she feels for him, that she also loves Carlo. The next morning, Nina told Steven that she and Carlo is already boyfriend/girlfriend. Steven was so happy for Nina but he asks Nina to invite Carlo in there house. At that moment, Carlo was visited by his co-worker Lorraine. Carlo knows that even he and Vivian are together, Lorraine had a crush on him. Lorraine was expecting that Carlo would fall for her but Carlo told her that he had a girlfriend. Lorraine feel mad, she wants to know who that girl is. One day, Carlo and Nina went in a restaurant for a lunch, Carlo didn't know that Lorraine was following them, when Lorraine saw Nina, she recognize her. She knows Nina because Steven was her college classmate. Lorraine looks for Steven's number. At that moment, Nina was eating her food when Carlo put something in front of her. It was a blue gift box. Nina looks at Carlo, Carlo told her to open it. Nina opens the blue box and surprise to see a white gold bracelet there. Carlo picks the bracelet and wears it on Nina's hand. Nina told Carlo that he doesn't have to give her a gift but Carlo replied that he wanted too. Nina smiled and told Carlo that having him is enough gifts for her. Carlo holds Nina's hand. That night, Lorraine calls Steven. Steven was surprise because he and Lorraine was not that close in college. Lorraine sets a meeting for her and Steven. Weekend, Carlo and Nina went to a park island. While on the ferry boat, Nina was looking the views from where she is. Carlo embraces her for behind. Carlo promises Nina that whatever happens, he will never hurt her and he will protect their love for each other. At that moment, Steven and Lorraine meet. Lorraine asks Steven if Nina has a boyfriend, Steven answered yes. Lorraine lends a picture to Steven and asks if the man in that picture is Nina's boyfriend. Steven look at the picture, it was Carlo with Vivian before they divorce. Steven answer he didn?t saw Nina's boyfriend yet. Lorraine told Steven that she saw Nina with Carlo and they were sweet together. Steven gets mad. That night, when Nina went home, Steven confronted her. Steven shows her the picture of Carlo and Vivian together and asks her if the man on the picture was her boyfriend. Nina answers yes. Steven slaps Nina; he told Nina that Carlo was a married man and divorce because of her. Nina feels frozen, is that true? Nina runaway and went to her room. She calls Carlo but Carlo phone was off. She was really depress, is it true that Carlo breaks his marriage because of her. The next morning, Carlo tries to call Nina but Nina's phone was off. That moment, Nina was looking at Carlo?s picture with her ex-wife. His wife was beautiful and she looks like a nice person. Carlo was really worried about Nina so he went to her house. He was about to ring the bell when Steven came. Steven asks him if he?s Carlo Cho, Carlo replied yes. Steven stays calm even he wants to punch Carlo. He told Carlo to stop seeing Nina. Carlo asks Steven why. Steven told Carlo that he doesn?t like him to be Nina's boyfriend because of there 12 years age gap and he wants someone who deserves for Nina. From that day, Nina and Carlo didn't see each other. Carlo was really depressed; he wants to see Nina so badly! Lorraine visited him, she advice him that he should start forgetting Nina because Steven would not allow them to continue their relationship. Lorraine invites him to go out so that he can breathe fresh air. They went to a restaurant to try new food. They start eating when the pianist plays the Moonlight Sonata. Carlo remember his happy moments with Nina, he misses her so much. After they eat, they went out to find some place to relax. Carlo saw man waiting in the car when a girl came out the boutique, it was Nina. Carlo calls Nina. Nina saw him but Nina immediately enter the car and the man driving it drive it away. Carlo tries to call Nina but Nina didn't answer his calls. One day, Carlo saw Vivian. Vivian invites him for a coffee. Vivian told Carlo that she meet Nina. Carlo asks her what tell her. Vivian tells Carlo that Nina asks her if they are married before, and she said yes. Nina didn't ask her anymore but Nina told her that she going to be married soon. Carlo feel frozen at that moment, before he and Nina lost communication, they were so happy. That night, Carlo cries over Nina's picture. The next day, Carlo was strolling around his restaurant when he saw Nina outside. He runs out the restaurant and confronted Nina. When Nina saw him, she starts to cry. Nina couldn't help it so she embraces Carlo. Carlo embraces her to and kisses her on her forehead. They went inside the restaurant to talk about what happen. Carlo asks Nina why she didn't talk to him for a long time. Nina said that she discovered that he's married before and divorce because of her. Carlo denies that, he told Nina that Vivian was the one who divorce him because of Vivian's personal thing. Carlo asks Nina if is it true that she going to marry someone, Nina answered yes. Carlo cried in front of Nina, and then, Nina soon-to-be-handsome came, it's Tristan Shin. Tristan told Nina that they have to go because they are going to meet Tristan's parents. Carlo talks to Tristan, he told Tristan to take care of Nina for him; Nina and Nina live. Steven was worried; Nina was depressed after meeting Tristan's parents. Nina doesn't want to go out like before and the smile on her face was gone. He asks her what the problem is. Nina told Steven that she misses Carlo so badly. After seeing his sister condition, Steven decided to back out the wedding. The Shin Family accepts this because Tristan can see that Nina really love Carlo. After a week, Nina was laying on her bed when Steven enters her room. Steven told Nina that she not going to marry Tristan. Nina smiled but she was surprise when she saw Carlo enters her room. Steven lives them. Carlo sits beside her and holds her hands. Carlo told her that Steven already agrees on their relationship. Nina hold Carlo's face and tell him that she really loves him and Carlo replied he loves her too. After that day, Nina gains her happy personality again. Steven blesses them and they start planning their marriage. From that day, Carlo Cho and Nina Nam lived happily ever after.
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It's sweet!But i dun like uhm taewoong,it'd have been better if lee dongwook was her boyfriend.
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Dong Wook Oppa don't look 12 years than Eugene so I choose Uhnm Tae Woong. I was planning to choose Park Shin Yang but I prefer Tae Woong...
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yeah he doesn't look 12 yrs older but i still dun like uhm taewoong.But i won't like it very much if park shinyang was the man.Uhm taewoong's better in that.
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Hehehe... You are so definately right!
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i want lee ji hoon or lee dong wook to be the partner of eugene..i dont like the face of uhm tae woong,i don't like him to be the partner if eugene.i'm a fan of eugene.i want lee dong wook or lee ji hoon.it will be looks good if this two guy are the leading men of eugene..just change the age if that's the only problem..hehhee..XD
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